New poem. Enjoy.
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I remember a time when the rain started to pour.
We looked outside and wanted to make it our dance floor.
I pulled back, thinking it'd only happen in my head.
But you opened up the door, looked at me and said:
Run with me, dance with me, the rain is so inviting.
We complain that life is dull, so let's be exciting.
We ran about, underneath clouds of gray
Got our hair wet, all cause you had to say:
Run with me, dance with me, the rain is so inviting
If I said this moment wasn't perfect, I'd be lying
I miss it so much, but I'll let it be
But never forget when you said "Run with me."
Please feel free to comment so I know if this sucks or not.
peace
Well, color me impressed.
ReplyDeleteMe Gusta!!!
ReplyDeleteThats really good. I wanna use it as a hook in a rap hahaha
ReplyDeleteAgain, I have a clear image of this in my head. I think that's a strength you have... Simple, yet beautiful ideas that your readers can easily imagine. I love it. :)
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